Mixedthat has great characters, but his narrative structure and also his dialogue I felt needed a bit of work.
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Breach of Peace (2021)
Creators: Mixed When an imperial family is found butchered, Officers of God are called to investigate. Evidence points to a rebel group trying to stab fear into the very heart of the empire. Inspector Khlid begins a harrowing hunt for those responsible, but when a larger conspiracy comes to light, she struggles to trust even the officers around her.
Mixed
Likedi felt the world building was a little fuzzy but i did like the characters and i like the story and i like the horror elements
Mixedthis was a solid three out of five or a six out of ten it wasn't amazing but i didn't dislike it was just kind of was good for a first entry
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Likedi liked it and i saw amazing potential and both where the story could go and what can be done with it and just how much could be built onto being daniel's debut novella
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MixedI mentioned in my review of BREACH OF PEACE that it was a story that some readers might not want to get into because it dealt with police violence.
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