I think the World building here is very rich there are parts of it that are incredibly dense there are parts of the story I mean there's a whole index in here in the glossery that you can look through and kind of see what's you know different characters and everything but there are Parts in here that are a little bit dense that I do think that this book could use some pruning on because there are part things that are mentioned about the history too that you're like why are you telling me this like I that wasn't even actually relevant.
Thoughts on Tomes 63.3K subscribers · Feb 22, 2024
A Day of Fallen Night (Spoiler Free) | REVIEW
I think that same as prior this is my opinion on Priory that this could have been two books and both of those things could have been fleshed out but also edited in some ways so yeah pacing is a problem with these books but I ultimately like the characters and the world and stuff make up for that and I do think the plots are overall very interesting and engaging.

