Shiftathon Reading Vlog

there's a lot of repetition in here there continues to be like good lines and then i'll be like why is this put in the middle of just like fluff and a lot of repetition so i'm hoping for improvements along the way here i just finished blood fever on day one exciting and it's two stars

it genuinely the writing when you're putting these two series not that these two series need to be compared but when i'm reading two series like back to back and comparing them anita blake is so good like it's genuinely the writing is good there's parts of the writing that are like funny and i don't go into my books like trying to laugh but like they'll be lying so i'll be like as they say something the characters even the background characters are like really good

this one i would say is like three 3.5 like a little bit above three i really like the world but i feel like i need to know a little bit more like i'm still a little bit confused like not enough was really revealed in this book for me to know not a lot about like characters and stuff

i do like but i do think these books could be shorter her books are typically in like four to five hundred a page range and they really should be in a 300 page range like if they're too long for no reason they just add so much fluff like somewhat like so little happened in this book actually it could have really been tightened up

there were probably like three different charlie baddies that they were going after not instagram baddies like paranormal creatures and there was all of that so like suspense you're wondering like what's connected to what very fun writing continues to be fun