More books that didn't work for me | DNFs | #SPFBO

I wanted to believe that it would get better and I think unfortunately the story just couldn't hook me in enough for me to really want to keep going and I also found a lot of again spelling grammar issues in this one which take me out of the story

I will say straight off that this is a well written but it does not have the same level of edits needed at all it's definitely a lot more polished than the other books I've spoken about in this video however with that being said I think for me the writing style was too choppy and I just didn't get on with it for that reason

unfortunately this one just did not have the same edit level as a lot of the other books that I was reading it also moved incredibly fast so points were coming up and action was happening really quick

unfortunately this book really didn't gel with me right from the start of it so I DNF this one fairly early and I think it was more a stylistic thing than anything else