I like how she writes a lot I like the old-timey talk and stuff it's very cool and she's setting up the story very well too she gives you just enough information to keep your attention so that's cool
Khalilah D. 148K subscribers · Nov 8, 2023
swapping my phone screen time for reading 📱📚✨
I feel like the story is very good but there's way too many like perfect coincidences pulling the story along and that just kind of takes the reality out of the story and consequently it feels less realistic so that's a little bit of a bummer but it is a really great story I am enjoying myself it is a fun read but I was hoping for more of something that was like Eerie or like a little more realistic than this and it's just it's not that so I'm a little bit sad about that but it's still very good.

