I thought this one was all right it was very cheesy but like it's a romcom like it's a romance so it's going to be cheesy that being said I think the story was cute for what it was I really enjoyed actually the attention to detail that the writing had when they were like describing all the pastries and the flavors
I read 9 romance books in 24 hours... and my brain has turned to mush
I think this is the first book in a very long time that I have given a five star review for like a ROM commi type book the last book I think I did give a five stars to that was ROM commi was happy place
I thought though around I think maybe like the 60 or 70% Mark of Magnolia Parks everything just started to get very repetitive and I started getting really like frustrated at how repetitive things were getting we just kind of had the same scenarios over and over and over again and the drama and the drama and the drama
I'm not a fan of how she writes banter like the main male character was just making me cringe he was very like pet Namy he kept calling our female main character sweetheart kiddo stuff like that like very like kid pet Namy and like it just made me cringe most of the story was just set in the float tank he was just talking to her from the outside I feel like because I didn't like the banter and that was the whole story this one just did not hit for me at all
This one was just really boring for me it was very install lovy there was no like spice and by spice I don't mean like smut I mean like spark I guess that's a better word for it there was no spark for me
I really liked this first Nolla I'm giving it 4.5 Stars which is a really high rating for a little Nolla that's only 100 pages long
I don't know I maybe realizing now that Sally Thorne really isn't my favorite author because I didn't really like the hating game either
I'm finding the story boring the pacing is like really slow I'm not connecting with the characters they kind of feel very generic they very much feel like romance book characters they don't have their own personalities they're just like literally crafted for a romance story not doing it for me
I continued reading and then all of a sudden I was just like so fully invested in the story it was so cute it was so endearing and heartwarming and emotional there were probably a lot of plot holes in terms of like the magic realism and the whole like time travel aspect there were definitely some like plot holes in there if you like try and think too logically about it but the story was just so well told and I really love this book
I think though in second place I would say worst wingman ever this one is the one that gets the Valentine's Day card on her windshield and this one was like hilarious I was literally laughing out loud
I liked how this one had more of a journey like an adventure feel we went to more different locations compared to the other short stories








