I took a while to get into it like I said it took me about a hundred or so pages before I really was invested and then from there I grew more and more invested as I win I think it definitely got better with the pacing the world was better it was clear and I cared more about what was going on maybe not cared for in a way that's like oh how sweet and like happy this is I didn't care for like that it was more like I was very interested in what was gonna happen next
Elliot Brooks 168K subscribers · Nov 8, 2018
